Saturday 23 August 2014

Saturday Limerick - Heart



There's a science and an art
to the chambers of my heart
You posed in the sunset
like a sculptor's statuette
Is like Cupid's arrow straight to the mark



I don't much like the flow of this one.
I really want to get this one right,
though, but it just doesn't fit right.
If anyone has any suggestions, they'd
be greatly appreciated.

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